Mind doing me a favor fellow nerdfighters?

[Cineris]

I posted a blog earlier that is the beginning of a book I want to write.
It's all true, kind of a documentation I suppose.
Anyways, I'd really like your thoughts on it.
Especially the literature/grammar/anything-along-the-Book-worm lines kind of nerdfighter =)
All are welcome to read it of course!

Thanks in advance to those who do.
Just leave your thoughts in the comments of my blog or here!
It's greatly appreciated.
Also, please be constructive and not mean.
I don't know "It sucks." statements, if you feel that way please tell me why. =)

[Neil]

Well as a writer who is about halfway through a book, I'll tell you that I'd keep reading.

It's a very nice concept and I'd be interested to see where it goes.

[Cineris]

Thank you very much =)
I really appreciate the feedback!
If there's anything wrong with it please feel free to let me know.