I'm more than happy and fairly able to help anyone who needs it in English or Creative Writing type things. I may not have read the book but I'm almost positive I can help you in your studying.
This would be great if you could help me out.
my main problems with writing are as follows.
Well, firstly, sometimes you just have to wait for inspiration to come to you, or even go looking for it if you have too. I have the same problem with my book. As for the choreography, I could take a look at it and ask my brother or dad (their big MMA guys lol) their opinion, but it might help to look up fighting scenes on youtube or something. Finally, if you could send me a some of what your righting I can get a better grasp on your flow and how you try an catch people attention.