Critique Me

[Alex Done]

Thought it may be useful to have an area where we could provide helpful feedback on each other's videos. Not sure if this is already a thing, but what harm could it cause :)

[Alex Done]

For example (shameless self promotion)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bkr3X90dOq8

enjoy and DFTBA :D

[N4m4w45]

Very interesting video!
I liked the kind of different take than you'd see in other videos. In stead of talking fast, you talk slow and kinda dramatic, and it feels much more sentimental than other things you'd see on the internet. Good job!

[Alex Done]

aha thanks :D that was what I was going for :)

[A. Julianna]

Looks great! It really does capture that traditional "lazy teen summer" feel: the restlessness, the ridiculousness, and best of all the simplicity of happiness. 

*cough, cough* Maybe check this out? Feedback? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X-XPOI03y7U&list=UUguSZGFChSK5mV...

[Alex Done]

thanks for the feedback :D

oh my i love it :) filming is great, as is the music :) very powerful

[N4m4w45]

WOW.

What a great short film!! I'm serious, that was amazing! The music made the whole thing, but the camera shots, and the quotes and the acting was absolutely amazing! Two thumbs up!!

[N4m4w45]

I really like this discussion. Not only are we able to get reviews for our videos, but we're also able to get a little publicity. ;D 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m5la42NV_38&feature=plcp&saf...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QI90lixF0lg&feature=plcp&saf...

The first link is one of my older videos, but I still really like it. The second link in one of my latest videos that uses my brand new camera! I hope you like them! 

[Alex Done]

haha totally agree :D critique and publicity all the way ;)

you have a great voice for vlogging, love your style, definitely worth a sub :) 

[N4m4w45]

Ooh! Thanks!! I'll return the favor!

[A. Julianna]

You're a fantastic speaker! You really get your messages straight across! Me gusta