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My story.

Hmm it has some mistakes, hope you like it anyway. :)
Here we go:

It was just another usual day at the hotel by the bright ocean. There were only a few clouds in the sky and the wind was blowing gently. There was no new guests around, except two. No one had been counting the days there, but it was supposed to be a midspirng day.
A slender young man was wandering around the coast, grumbling, with his hands in his pockets. His black hairas neither short nor long, his greey eyes seemed obviously confused but also a bit excited. He was like looking for something he had lost.
“Austin?” said the manager to himself, who was taking a glance at the young man from his office’s window. “Austin.”
However, Austin was too busy to realize him watch, with his head in the clouds, lost in deep thoughts. He had never wanted to come here, he even hadn’t any memories about him and his sister’s childhood. “Think it as a holiday.” He murmured patiently. “No more than a holiday.” Then, he kept on searching for his missing backpack.
He didn’t notice the sparking-eyed girl of medium height approaching either. Anyone could say she was so cheerful –maybe a bit more than necessary under those conditions- because she was smiling even when she came nearer the young man who didn’t look to be content about anything at that moment.
They accidentally ran into each other. “Ouch!” cried Austin as though he had been dreaming, but when their eyes met, he became much nicer. The girl looked extremely sorry for what had happened. There was something different about her. No, nothing at all when you take a look: her golden hair was surrounding her long face, her skin was pretty pale and she had some childish freckles. No different than a usual 21-years-old girl. But the only eye catching thing about her was the look in her giggling eyes.
-Oh sorry, said Austin.
-No problem.
-So… It’s Austin, what about you?
The girl paused for a while and slightly smiled, Austin was kind of amazed that he didn’t even wonderwhy.
-Amanda.
They sat there on a rock and talked for a few hours. Austin had already forgotten what he was doing and why. The whole world was way more meaningful than it had ever been, everything was marvellous –including the little butterflies in his stomach- and even the manager of the hotel might not be suspicious about his weird manners. But all of a sudden his backpack came up to his mind so he stared around. Then, he heard Amanda’s friendly voice:
-Is this yours?
-Oh yes! Where was it?
-Ahh I found it just over there.
-Thanks, thanks!
He looked at his watch, not sure how much time passed by. It was already half past ten. He knew he had to leave for his meeting and sighed.
-Oh no. I had better go now. I’m almost late.
He really meant what he said. He didn’t want to go away at all.
-See you soon! said Amanda and smiled expressively.
Austin grabbed his backpack and rushed into the entrance where he should have been waiting at for his stepsister. She must already have been there. He sat on a bank next to the door, and looked for the piece of paper on which some instructions about the meeting was written, for a while.
Instead, he found another one which said, “Hey brother. “

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Comment by Hayden Richardson on Thursday

hey! everyone! do you like the great gatsby? of course you do! EVERYONE likes the GREAT GATSBY. maybe because you were forced to read it in english class, maybe because its a classic piece of american literature! or maybe because that movie that just came out. regardless, i rewrote the first chapter for english class (the teacher wanted us to come up with an original idea for a project describing the novel) a few months back and figured I should just post it in a world containing a multitude of authors and readers. here's the link

The Great Gatsby Modernized

please give me some feedback! ;D

Comment by Hannah Bell on Wednesday

Would anyone on here be willing to give me some feedback on a dystopian novel I've been working on? I'd really appreciate a fresh set of eyes taking a look at what I have so far and who better to do so than Nerdfighters? Message me if you're interested. Thanks!

Comment by Alice In Wonderland on Wednesday
Wish I wasn't so late in responding! I'd love to do a collab aswell, if the offers still up (For you or anyone else!) I love writing Fanfiction as well as your average story. Favorite Genres are Drama and Romance. Sappy stuff. I'm a girl, sue me. If anyone's interested, chemistryoflife@live.com
XOXO Alice
Comment by Charlotte LoMedico on Wednesday

Hello, I'm trying to start a literary magazine within the Nerdfighter community! Please see the open letter to Nerdfighteria if you are interested and feel freer than free to spread the word. Thanks!

Comment by David N on May 11, 2013 at 9:54pm

@Tyme Knight

I'd like to do that, sure.

Contact me at davidaaronnica@gmail.com

Comment by Tyme Knight (RebeccaBlankenship) on May 8, 2013 at 4:01pm

Um, hi. I really enjoy writing, but I never finish anything good, and I don't have the time to writing much anymore, but I'd like to. Can I make a request that someone join me in writing a collaborative story? I'd really appreciate it :)

Comment by Karl de Leon on May 7, 2013 at 5:11am

Hey Guys :) Not too long ago, I decided to write a story of The Fault in Our Stars' character, Isaac. The story revolves around the time when he was about to lose his eyes and monica just broke up with him. Check it out! And Tell me what you guys think!! THANKS :D

http://andkarlsaid.tumblr.com/post/46593317254/isaac

Comment by Karl de Leon on May 7, 2013 at 4:56am

Oh and can anybody give me some 411 about this website called "figment.com" that you guys use for your stories? I'm thinking of making my own.... Is it better than Wattpad or something?? 

Comment by Karl de Leon on May 7, 2013 at 4:54am

Hey nerdfighters! I wouldn't post my story in here, but rather, I would give you guyst the link to where I post all of my stories. I post them here at my tumblr : http://andkarlsaid.tumblr.com ... It contains mostly about the things I write. And I write about almost everything I see and feel. I know it's no good, compared to your all of your awesome (and heartbreaking stories), but it would really mean a WHOLE LOT if you would go visit my page and tell me what you think :)) Thank you guys :D DTFBA

Comment by Plot Twist on April 29, 2013 at 8:42pm

heres what i've got so far of my first story http://figment.com/books/630688-Geekmance/chapters/1098347/edit?sf=0   

And I wanted to add this Idiom in later "You have to make it through the storm to see the rainbow, then you have to follow the rainbow all the way to the end to reach you pot of gold"

 

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