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My story.

Hmm it has some mistakes, hope you like it anyway. :)
Here we go:

It was just another usual day at the hotel by the bright ocean. There were only a few clouds in the sky and the wind was blowing gently. There was no new guests around, except two. No one had been counting the days there, but it was supposed to be a midspirng day.
A slender young man was wandering around the coast, grumbling, with his hands in his pockets. His black hairas neither short nor long, his greey eyes seemed obviously confused but also a bit excited. He was like looking for something he had lost.
“Austin?” said the manager to himself, who was taking a glance at the young man from his office’s window. “Austin.”
However, Austin was too busy to realize him watch, with his head in the clouds, lost in deep thoughts. He had never wanted to come here, he even hadn’t any memories about him and his sister’s childhood. “Think it as a holiday.” He murmured patiently. “No more than a holiday.” Then, he kept on searching for his missing backpack.
He didn’t notice the sparking-eyed girl of medium height approaching either. Anyone could say she was so cheerful –maybe a bit more than necessary under those conditions- because she was smiling even when she came nearer the young man who didn’t look to be content about anything at that moment.
They accidentally ran into each other. “Ouch!” cried Austin as though he had been dreaming, but when their eyes met, he became much nicer. The girl looked extremely sorry for what had happened. There was something different about her. No, nothing at all when you take a look: her golden hair was surrounding her long face, her skin was pretty pale and she had some childish freckles. No different than a usual 21-years-old girl. But the only eye catching thing about her was the look in her giggling eyes.
-Oh sorry, said Austin.
-No problem.
-So… It’s Austin, what about you?
The girl paused for a while and slightly smiled, Austin was kind of amazed that he didn’t even wonderwhy.
-Amanda.
They sat there on a rock and talked for a few hours. Austin had already forgotten what he was doing and why. The whole world was way more meaningful than it had ever been, everything was marvellous –including the little butterflies in his stomach- and even the manager of the hotel might not be suspicious about his weird manners. But all of a sudden his backpack came up to his mind so he stared around. Then, he heard Amanda’s friendly voice:
-Is this yours?
-Oh yes! Where was it?
-Ahh I found it just over there.
-Thanks, thanks!
He looked at his watch, not sure how much time passed by. It was already half past ten. He knew he had to leave for his meeting and sighed.
-Oh no. I had better go now. I’m almost late.
He really meant what he said. He didn’t want to go away at all.
-See you soon! said Amanda and smiled expressively.
Austin grabbed his backpack and rushed into the entrance where he should have been waiting at for his stepsister. She must already have been there. He sat on a bank next to the door, and looked for the piece of paper on which some instructions about the meeting was written, for a while.
Instead, he found another one which said, “Hey brother. “

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Comment by Tommy Smith on Monday

Not sure if I've ever posted a comment in here before, but I have written a couple of things and they will be free this coming weekend (Aug 1st - Aug 3rd). I didn't want to post links to something that cost money, I hope that makes sense. If anyone is interested and gets a chance to read one, or both, please let me know what you think. 

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Comment by Vincent Loh on July 10, 2014 at 9:59am

I've heard quite a few bad things about Wattpad. I'd recommend the fanfic site sister site (fictionpress.com). Pretty interesting stories there. If you're into that kind of stuff the actual fanfic site has some pretty good stuff too (if you ignore the smut).

Comment by MoAde M Jagusah on July 6, 2014 at 8:54pm

Katie, I would suggest to use something other than wattpad.com I've been on there. Not to diss any wattpad users, but the werewolf lore is extremely unoriginal, and oftentimes people have bad spelling/grammar. I prefer Figment.com. :D

Comment by HannahMFuller on July 6, 2014 at 12:24pm

Hey there, I've been aboard the RP train for a while now and though it's a daily writing exercise, I find myself numb to other writing pursuits.

I'm interested in a Skype writing group after July 20th or so. We could discuss things but I'd really like to have a set time where we could sit and just write. The set time to be on call would push the members to actually write and have no excuses. (Oh, believe me, I am the master of excuses)

Something like this

We can critique our work together in a non-judgmental environment and definitely a no-thief zone. 

After perusing Skype, I can see that, for free, we can add up to 25 people to call and 10 to video chat. 

I'd like to keep the total group number under 10, thank you. Also, a possible Facebook group or something so we can stay in contact and schedule meetings. Let me know! 

Comment by Katie Aman on June 29, 2014 at 6:59pm

I have always been kind of ambivalent about trying to write any long piece but now I am attempting something...not sure where I am going with it but here's the link on wattpad. http://www.wattpad.com/57126783-the-girl-who-lived-prologue Feel free to leave feedback for me if you want on wattpad or here...it would definitely be appreciated.  

Comment by Emilee Ayers on June 26, 2014 at 8:11am

Hey Julia, let's start a discussion!
I feel kinda badly blowing up the comment wall

Comment by Jules on June 25, 2014 at 10:00pm

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bthfcNlWrPmcyg-GgpyLN-VoJrtAb83...

Alright then! Great! Give me suggestions and honest oppinions.

Comment by David N on June 25, 2014 at 2:45pm

@Julia Faith

Yes, please post the link here or start a discussion!

Comment by Emilee Ayers on June 25, 2014 at 1:59pm

I would love to, @julia Faith!

Comment by Katelynn Paluch on June 25, 2014 at 1:38pm

YES YES YES Please send me the link, I'll be your editor @Julia Faith ;)

 

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