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My story.

Hmm it has some mistakes, hope you like it anyway. :)
Here we go:

It was just another usual day at the hotel by the bright ocean. There were only a few clouds in the sky and the wind was blowing gently. There was no new guests around, except two. No one had been counting the days there, but it was supposed to be a midspirng day.
A slender young man was wandering around the coast, grumbling, with his hands in his pockets. His black hairas neither short nor long, his greey eyes seemed obviously confused but also a bit excited. He was like looking for something he had lost.
“Austin?” said the manager to himself, who was taking a glance at the young man from his office’s window. “Austin.”
However, Austin was too busy to realize him watch, with his head in the clouds, lost in deep thoughts. He had never wanted to come here, he even hadn’t any memories about him and his sister’s childhood. “Think it as a holiday.” He murmured patiently. “No more than a holiday.” Then, he kept on searching for his missing backpack.
He didn’t notice the sparking-eyed girl of medium height approaching either. Anyone could say she was so cheerful –maybe a bit more than necessary under those conditions- because she was smiling even when she came nearer the young man who didn’t look to be content about anything at that moment.
They accidentally ran into each other. “Ouch!” cried Austin as though he had been dreaming, but when their eyes met, he became much nicer. The girl looked extremely sorry for what had happened. There was something different about her. No, nothing at all when you take a look: her golden hair was surrounding her long face, her skin was pretty pale and she had some childish freckles. No different than a usual 21-years-old girl. But the only eye catching thing about her was the look in her giggling eyes.
-Oh sorry, said Austin.
-No problem.
-So… It’s Austin, what about you?
The girl paused for a while and slightly smiled, Austin was kind of amazed that he didn’t even wonderwhy.
-Amanda.
They sat there on a rock and talked for a few hours. Austin had already forgotten what he was doing and why. The whole world was way more meaningful than it had ever been, everything was marvellous –including the little butterflies in his stomach- and even the manager of the hotel might not be suspicious about his weird manners. But all of a sudden his backpack came up to his mind so he stared around. Then, he heard Amanda’s friendly voice:
-Is this yours?
-Oh yes! Where was it?
-Ahh I found it just over there.
-Thanks, thanks!
He looked at his watch, not sure how much time passed by. It was already half past ten. He knew he had to leave for his meeting and sighed.
-Oh no. I had better go now. I’m almost late.
He really meant what he said. He didn’t want to go away at all.
-See you soon! said Amanda and smiled expressively.
Austin grabbed his backpack and rushed into the entrance where he should have been waiting at for his stepsister. She must already have been there. He sat on a bank next to the door, and looked for the piece of paper on which some instructions about the meeting was written, for a while.
Instead, he found another one which said, “Hey brother. “

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Comment by Liv J. on November 11, 2014 at 2:58pm

We are awesome

Comment by Daniel Tickner on October 28, 2014 at 7:53pm

Hello Nerdfighters I would just like to congratulate anyone who writes anything. I would also like to say you should definatly read my fan fiction Chronicles of the Ponyverse, which follows Twilight Sparkle as she travels to different worlds. I mainly want to get feedback.

DFTBA

Comment by Jamie on October 13, 2014 at 5:03pm

I have a little over 3 chapters written for a book that I'm trying to write, but I need an editor. All of my friends that I have sent my story to either won't email me back or reply with vague things like "It's really good!", which means I can't make it better. If you're interested in editing a story that gets really dark and that probably won't be updated all that often, please please please message me.

Comment by Tavy is a baby again!! on September 22, 2014 at 3:01pm

I wrote a poem last year for school and it is getting published in a big book of poems :) I'm so happy!!!

Comment by Emma Joy on September 4, 2014 at 3:28pm

I've been writing a story for the past few weeks, and I just figured I'd share. It's on Wattpad, and rated PG-13, so you might need an account to view it, I'm not sure... But here's the link anyway. http://www.wattpad.com/story/22350071-work-in-progress

Comment by Alyssa High on September 4, 2014 at 8:16am

I am writing a book and am looking for a GOOD editor. I'm a perfectionist and will not settle for errors. I won't post my draft on here... but I will email the editor I chose. Email me if you want more details! -DFTBA Thanks

Comment by Nicki-Anne Simpson on August 8, 2014 at 1:43am

Nerdfighters, I'm reaching out for help. For those of you who don't know, I'm an aspiring YA author. I finished the (4th) draft of my debut novel this spring and am now looking to self-publish. Unfortunately the costs are a little out of my wallet at the moment.

I've started a kickstarter campaign to try and raise the money to make my dreams a reality. If you guys wouldn't mind checking it out, I'd really appreciate it. Even if you can't donate, sharing it so it can get to people who can donate would help so much.

Comment by Tommy Smith on July 27, 2014 at 9:33pm

Not sure if I've ever posted a comment in here before, but I have written a couple of things and they will be free this coming weekend (Aug 1st - Aug 3rd). I didn't want to post links to something that cost money, I hope that makes sense. If anyone is interested and gets a chance to read one, or both, please let me know what you think. 

e-Zombie & The Underground

Comment by Vincent Loh on July 10, 2014 at 9:59am

I've heard quite a few bad things about Wattpad. I'd recommend the fanfic site sister site (fictionpress.com). Pretty interesting stories there. If you're into that kind of stuff the actual fanfic site has some pretty good stuff too (if you ignore the smut).

Comment by MoAde M Jagusah on July 6, 2014 at 8:54pm

Katie, I would suggest to use something other than wattpad.com I've been on there. Not to diss any wattpad users, but the werewolf lore is extremely unoriginal, and oftentimes people have bad spelling/grammar. I prefer Figment.com. :D

 

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