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My story.

Hmm it has some mistakes, hope you like it anyway. :)
Here we go:

It was just another usual day at the hotel by the bright ocean. There were only a few clouds in the sky and the wind was blowing gently. There was no new guests around, except two. No one had been counting the days there, but it was supposed to be a midspirng day.
A slender young man was wandering around the coast, grumbling, with his hands in his pockets. His black hairas neither short nor long, his greey eyes seemed obviously confused but also a bit excited. He was like looking for something he had lost.
“Austin?” said the manager to himself, who was taking a glance at the young man from his office’s window. “Austin.”
However, Austin was too busy to realize him watch, with his head in the clouds, lost in deep thoughts. He had never wanted to come here, he even hadn’t any memories about him and his sister’s childhood. “Think it as a holiday.” He murmured patiently. “No more than a holiday.” Then, he kept on searching for his missing backpack.
He didn’t notice the sparking-eyed girl of medium height approaching either. Anyone could say she was so cheerful –maybe a bit more than necessary under those conditions- because she was smiling even when she came nearer the young man who didn’t look to be content about anything at that moment.
They accidentally ran into each other. “Ouch!” cried Austin as though he had been dreaming, but when their eyes met, he became much nicer. The girl looked extremely sorry for what had happened. There was something different about her. No, nothing at all when you take a look: her golden hair was surrounding her long face, her skin was pretty pale and she had some childish freckles. No different than a usual 21-years-old girl. But the only eye catching thing about her was the look in her giggling eyes.
-Oh sorry, said Austin.
-No problem.
-So… It’s Austin, what about you?
The girl paused for a while and slightly smiled, Austin was kind of amazed that he didn’t even wonderwhy.
-Amanda.
They sat there on a rock and talked for a few hours. Austin had already forgotten what he was doing and why. The whole world was way more meaningful than it had ever been, everything was marvellous –including the little butterflies in his stomach- and even the manager of the hotel might not be suspicious about his weird manners. But all of a sudden his backpack came up to his mind so he stared around. Then, he heard Amanda’s friendly voice:
-Is this yours?
-Oh yes! Where was it?
-Ahh I found it just over there.
-Thanks, thanks!
He looked at his watch, not sure how much time passed by. It was already half past ten. He knew he had to leave for his meeting and sighed.
-Oh no. I had better go now. I’m almost late.
He really meant what he said. He didn’t want to go away at all.
-See you soon! said Amanda and smiled expressively.
Austin grabbed his backpack and rushed into the entrance where he should have been waiting at for his stepsister. She must already have been there. He sat on a bank next to the door, and looked for the piece of paper on which some instructions about the meeting was written, for a while.
Instead, he found another one which said, “Hey brother. “

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Comment by Shelby Lynn on February 4, 2014 at 12:23pm

I am now in this group. I am currently writing  a couple of books, talk to me if you want to read any of them.

Comment by Erin E on February 3, 2014 at 5:49pm
hi there! I am new and was wondering if someone could help me out
Comment by Hope Jones on February 1, 2014 at 1:28pm
I have written a few short stories of my own, which I have yet to finish, and I have FanFictions I have written and in the process of finishing. I hope you might read and review to see how my writing style is! I would really appreciate suggestions on how to make my stories sound more professional! Thanks!

Here is the link: https://m.fanfiction.net/u/4050657/Alpha-Gal
Comment by Nattie Light on February 1, 2014 at 10:11am

Hi guys! I'm new to the group and just wanted to introduce myself! I'm Nattie and happy to be here!

Comment by Garrett Robinson on January 28, 2014 at 7:13pm

So I know we're writers, not readers, but if people DO also like reading (and have the time for it!) the first book in my series is up and free. And it's very nerdfighteria-y. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B00DWK765M

Comment by DeNiece on January 28, 2014 at 8:24am

@Mary Kate Welcome!

@Rachelle Yes, that's the easiest way for people to comment on your work.

Comment by Rachelle Lady on January 27, 2014 at 10:51pm
So I was wondering if I wanted to post a little short something. Do I just do it in the add a discussion area?
Comment by Mary Kate on January 27, 2014 at 8:31pm

Hello Universe of Writer Nerd Fighters,

Im so happy to join you all; finding a group of people who like to write as much as I do is such a joy. If any of you want to chat or message me about your works or to ask me about mine feel free (I'm hoping to make some friends).

-Mary Kate

Comment by Garrett Robinson on January 26, 2014 at 5:15pm

Has anyone in here had anything published? I review books on my blog and would be happy to send some love to fellows amongst Nerdfighteria.

Comment by Omar Alejandro Del Real on January 20, 2014 at 6:16pm

Jaaja, I really appreciate Abreo you taking time to read my whacky Möbius poem. Although I have problems with grammar, that was intentionally confusing between the God, Human, and Machine cycle that I wanted to compare it to God, Chicken, Egg cycle thing. English is not my mother tongue, but I've been reading Godel Escher Bach, and the confusion comes from more a syntactic confusion that I wanted to create. There is a problem with Fiction press that doesn't allow you to underline the text, I wanted to have the human be the normal dialog, the machine talk in italics, and God be underline, so there is three people who are at the same time the creator of the next. Sorry I'm just a confusing person.

 

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