"It seems fine to me, like a good little fluff piece. Though it doesn't really amount to much in the way of plot, then again I'm watching NCIS right now so anything could be less than exciting compared to that. I don't know I like it I…"
"WattPad is good, but I would watch out for people using it poorly. Like I honestly got Beautiful Creatures suggested to me and it was just someone typing up the actual book and claiming it was their own. I don't really use WattPad since then. I…"
"Well if you want to self publish, I would look for free agent editors on like yellow pages or something like that... Or ask someone else you know to edit it. Also might I suggest createspace.com it does a lot for you depending on the package."
Hi :) Yeah, I don't really know that many people IRL that are on pottermore and then I saw some of you put down your names in one of the discussions, so I added you all :D It's kind of annoying that you can't just add a message there though, so people would know who you are.