"I like both very much. Very short, abrupt, punctual and curt.I agree that you need to work on the flow of the first; it seems almost choppy at some points. The imagery was good, though.The second was good, I liked it. The title and content continue…"
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David N replied to Xarayia's discussion Can somebody just review this real quick? in the group Writer Nerdfighters!
Michael (Steven Hyde) replied to Xarayia's discussion Can somebody just review this real quick? in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"Even if the jarring is right for the first one, which I now see what you mean... at the very least the 2nd half needs reworking"
N4m4w45 replied to Xarayia's discussion Can somebody just review this real quick? in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"I actually rather like the first poem. Its jarring, yes, but its seems like its supposed to be jarring. Its supposed to have that effect on you, and it'll stick with me.
The second one was a bit odd, and though poetic, its more of a mystery to…"
Michael (Steven Hyde) replied to Xarayia's discussion Can somebody just review this real quick? in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"There are things you could do to improve it, but I don't think anything short of a complete restructure will make it a similar caliber to the second"
Xarayia replied to Xarayia's discussion Can somebody just review this real quick? in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"Yeah, I felt weird about the first one, too. Anything I can do to make it better?"
Michael (Steven Hyde) replied to Xarayia's discussion Can somebody just review this real quick? in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"First one doesn't really flow right, second one is pretty good."
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Can somebody just review this real quick?
I would be eternally grateful to anyone who would read and review these for me!ApologiesYou tell herYou are sorryAnd she laughsCruellyBecause she doesn't believe you And you walk awayAshamedBecause you reallyHad meant itTuesday Nights"I'm going to bury myself alive,"She says,Words whispered against his neckLips brushing his skin as she speaks.He laughsLow in his chestTangling his hands through her hairAnd drops a fiercely gentle kiss on her foreheadBefore he answers,"Good luck with that." See More
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- I like to read. A lot. Mostly sci-fi and fantasy, but anything with words will do.
Joss Whedon is my god.
I like webcomics, my tv, and laughing.
I'm definitely a cat person.
- Favorite Books, Movies, Music, and more
- My favorite books are The Lord of the Rings, The Name of the Wind, The Wheel of Time series, and anything by Neil Gaiman or Brandon Sanderson.
Favorite movies! The Lord of the Rings, Up, Rubber, Serenity, Starwars
My favorite music changes pretty much every week, but Ludo is always one of my favorite bands.
- What's your favorite thing to put on your head?
- Baskets
- If you could do your happy dance with anyone who would it be with?
- Andrew Volpe
- When did you start watching the Vlogbrothers?
- June, 2011
- Make up your own DFTBA initialism!
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