"First impression: its pretty good. I would definitely be interested in reading more, if you have it. I have no idea where this story is going or what the time frame is (I'm assuming its set in the future but how far?) though. Be careful about…"
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Novel in the making.
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This is probably the third or so time I've posted a bit of a novel that I had been working on, but this time I'm older, more patient and more accepting of criticism, so here goes. This novel so far…Continue
Started this discussion. Last reply by Cherie Noel Feb 1.
My Chat Is Broken.
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I have no idea why, I got a virus not too long ago and I've since gotten rid of it but the chat doesn't show up anymore, it'll just be a blank white space where chat used to appear.Sometimes it'll…Continue
Started this discussion. Last reply by Enika Jul 17, 2010.
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Jessica E. commented on Brandy (Ops NM)'s blog post Another novel in the making."Great voice and interesting to read, but you might want to try to combine or alter some sentences to make them longer... it all seems a bit choppy right now."
Brandy (Ops NM) posted a blog postAnother novel in the making.
This is probably the third or so time I've posted a bit of a novel that I had been working on, but this time I'm older, more patient and more accepting of criticism, so here goes. This novel so far doesn't have a title, but the one I'm working under is simply 'HOSTAGE', it's subject to change, however. This is the opening extract:_______________________________________________________I hadn't seen the sun in days. Or so it seemed. When I opened my eyes it must have been setting. The sky a red…See More
Eske commented on Brandy (Ops NM)'s blog post Strike"Please keep on writing, I want to know how it goes on! Thanks for sharing this first bit with us!"
Anastasia Cass commented on Brandy (Ops NM)'s blog post Strike"I'd love to see more, I like your writing! Keep up on this. :D"
Brandy (Ops NM)'s blog post was featuredStrike
Just a quick post of the opening three paragraphs of the story I'm working on, called "Strike", hope you enjoy.“Harry, finish your soup, then you can go out with your friends.” His mother glared, but Harry didn't eat, his head hung, eyes fixed on the bowl in front of him. “Harry...” He didn't move.“I'm not hungry.”“You look it.” She was right. For the past few weeks he hadn't been eating very much, his body began to look slimmer, his skin grew pale in comparison to what it had been like.…See More
Brandy (Ops NM) left a comment for Caio Don"Caio, long time no speak, I'll be surprised if you remember me? :)"
Brandy (Ops NM) commented on Brandy (Ops NM)'s blog post Strike"Thank you.
He will do, that's if I stick to this introduction of the story or change it further."
"thats really good.
does Harry find out what his dad blames him for?"
Brandy (Ops NM) posted a blog postStrike
Just a quick post of the opening three paragraphs of the story I'm working on, called "Strike", hope you enjoy.“Harry, finish your soup, then you can go out with your friends.” His mother glared, but Harry didn't eat, his head hung, eyes fixed on the bowl in front of him. “Harry...” He didn't move.“I'm not hungry.”“You look it.” She was right. For the past few weeks he hadn't been eating very much, his body began to look slimmer, his skin grew pale in comparison to what it had been like.…See More
Brandy (Ops NM) commented on TK is Everything's group Ning Families"My God, I haven't been here in over a year me thinks? It feels odd, and I have missed everyone I used to talk to."
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- What Kind of Nerdfighter Are You?
- Literary Nerdfighter
- About Me:
- I'm a nineteen year old aspiring novelist, among other things. My hobbies include but are not limited to; writing, video games, writing, playing piano, socialising with fellow Nerdfighters, drawing, painting, writing, playing football... I hope to become a modern-age da Vinci, a man I know far, far too much about.
- Favorite Books, Movies, Music, and more
- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, Interview with the Vampire, oh so much music that I cannot be bothered to currently list and my hobbies consist of writing, football (English football, or Soccer) and video games, but that's just to name a few.
- What's your favorite thing to put on your head?
- My arm.
- If you could do your happy dance with anyone who would it be with?
- John Green.
- When did you start watching the Vlogbrothers?
- January, 2010
- Make up your own DFTBA initialism!
- Dinosaurs Forget To Be Alive.
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Another novel in the making.
This is probably the third or so time I've posted a bit of a novel that I had been working on, but this time I'm older, more patient and more accepting of criticism, so here goes. This novel so far doesn't have a title, but the one I'm working under is simply 'HOSTAGE', it's subject to change, however. This is the opening extract:
_______________________________________________________
I…
ContinuePosted on January 20, 2013 at 9:19pm — 1 Comment
Strike
Just a quick post of the opening three paragraphs of the story I'm working on, called "Strike", hope you enjoy.
“Harry, finish your soup, then you can go out with your friends.” His mother glared, but Harry didn't eat, his head hung, eyes fixed on the bowl in front of him. “Harry...” He didn't move.
“…
ContinuePosted on January 23, 2012 at 9:30am — 5 Comments
A novel in the making.
Hello to all who read, I would like to give to you a brief section of a little project I am working on. The novel follows a so far unnamed protagonist who is bored with all of the mundane, trivial and frankly unexciting American life and just looks to find a release from it all. He finds himself siding along with Freedom Fighters in a remote area of Sudan, Africa looking to overthrow the tyrant President in a struggle to give the country… Continue
Posted on July 12, 2010 at 2:55pm — 4 Comments
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- At 5:36pm on January 25, 2012,
Caio Don said… Wow, Hick, you're alive!!!! =D
of course I remember you, I believe you arrived at about July, 2010, no? Am I wrong? Idk, my memory isn't thaaat good.
Well, hello =)
- At 2:41pm on April 14, 2011,
Liza Someone said… - Writing a book you say. Well I'm going to start writing a book of my own soon. Got any tips helpfull tips on planing and sticking to it? love to hear them.
- At 7:46pm on October 10, 2010, Caio Don said…
- Hey Brandon
long time huh
so....
yeah. That's it. Come more often XD
*random*
- At 9:25pm on September 24, 2010,
Luciano Spanto said… - Hi Brandon. My name is Luciano, and I'm from Argentina. I wanted to ask you if you wanted to join a group of Nerdfighters (Katie Pyne, Giovanna and Natalie Zena Louise) to be part of a collab channel we are starting. The idea is to get people from different places. If you're interested, send me a message.
DFTBA,
Luciano.
- At 5:59pm on August 10, 2010,
AlexTheNerdyOne said… - Hi Brandon, I know you are a writer, and from what I have read a pretty good one. Thought you might be interested in this: http://nerdfighters.ning.com/group/nerdfightercollabbook?xg_source=activity
- At 6:33pm on July 20, 2010,
Highly Deadly Black Tarantula said… - HI BRANDY! -waves frantically-
- At 10:06am on July 13, 2010,
TK is Everything said… - No problem ^_^ have fun writing :D
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