"Firstly, excellent book. I love the direction this novel is going. Every one of the mistakes common in "Girl has impulse, goes to foreign country, goes native"-type media you have managed to skillfully avoid. Well done.
However, there are…"
Okay, so I know some of you read the first part of my novel and now I'm coordinating with NaNo so I have a second part! Wahey! I had a few people say that they were interested in reading what came next, so I have that, as well as the first part. (This is probably the last I'll be posting here, though. I just want to make sure I'm still doing well. I think I am. Though who knows.)The day you graduated high school was supposed to be the first day of the rest of your life; from there, you were…See More
"Oooh, another 13 year old writing a novel. Well :)
I think this is pretty good, and it definitley had me wanting more. There are a few grammatical errors and a few places with awkward wording, so you might want to fix that. Also, you might want to…"
"Sounds great! But I agree with Sarah, you do need to scatter the info a bit. Also, if it's not explained later in the book, you need to explain why the protagonist can't go to college. It's well-written, though, and it'd…"
"In my college creative writing class this semester, we always have this question posed to us in workshops: where does the story start?
Now, I know this is only a page from what is supposed to be a novel, but all this background information at the…"
"The Hobbit smells fantastic! My friend Graham had this nice, old copy of it and I asked if I could smell it, he said sure, and I've never looked back. XD I was just sniffing it and my teacher took one look at me, and said: "The Hobbit…"
"Great work so far! You're taking the right approach by sitting down and putting down words before fretting too much over much of anything, really. Keep with this approach! (Although you may want to coordinate with NaNoWriMo, which is just…"
"Please go on! I'm fifteen and that's better than anything I've ever written, guarenteed! And I've been writing a lot over the past year or so. I've actually got 2 novels (one half done, the other 2 chapters in) and a fairly…"
I am a groovy person with a love for Indie British rock and Doctor Who. I'm a writer and a musician, sort of. I like quirky things and useless facts.
Favorite Books, Movies, Music, and more
Books: Sarah Dessen, Maureen Johnson, JK Rowling, J.R.R Tolkien, John Green
Music: Eddplant, Alex Day, Chameleon Circuit, Hank Green, Taylor Swift, Greyson Chance, One Republic
TV Shows: Doctor Who, How I Met Your Mother, Big Bang Theory
What's your favorite thing to put on your head?
Books! I put books on my head quite a bit, actually.
If you could do your happy dance with anyone who would it be with?