"I feel as if prologues should be more intense, and with less detail. This seems more like a beginning chapter to me, but that is just my opinion. Also you have some work to do with your grammar, but nothing you can't fix with some peer editing.…"
Here is a little bit of a sci-fi novel I think I might write. I am looking for criticism so don't be afraid to let loose on me. Good reading. A man with long brunette hair crouched low to the ground engulfed in shadow, waiting intently for his orders. He had waited an eternity for this moment, he thought to himself as he crouched in the snow at the base of the enormous wretched building. Snow blew in spiraling gusts all around the man. His heart skipped a beat at the idea that on this night he…See More