"It seems like it may be good, but the voice of the character is very stiff and formalized. Loosen the voice up, or else it can feel dull and pretentious. "
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Kristi Marie Winters
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Abigail replied to Kristi Marie Winters's discussion I need an opinion... in the group Writer Nerdfighters!
Kristi Marie Winters replied to Kristi Marie Winters's discussion I need an opinion... in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"That was a mistake on my part. Truth be told, I forget words a lot."
Abreo replied to Kristi Marie Winters's discussion I need an opinion... in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"Seems over-dramatic for the little amount of actual misery you express here. You might want to tone down your use of words associated with evil or death or horror because you're coming on too strong with that sort of description and all without…"
Amy H. replied to Kristi Marie Winters's discussion I need an opinion... in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"It reads really well, in fact it is a great hook. You may want to avoid rambling however. Keep the Author to Reader minimal or you may find it harder to get out.
"My brothers are next in line, but I can make easy work of them. I shall…"
David N replied to Kristi Marie Winters's discussion I need an opinion... in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"I like it very much. The only issues I see are some forgotten words, and some repetition:"My dear father is dying. He far too old to do the things he once did. Bringing the destruction to fragile little realm is a young man's job. He is…"
Capn Bubbles Nerdfighting Pirate replied to Kristi Marie Winters's discussion I need an opinion... in the group Writer Nerdfighters!"It's certainly an interesting beginning, and I'd definitely keep reading, but it needs a really strong story to go along with it, because otherwise it could get boring very quickly."
Kristi Marie Winters added a discussion to the group Writer Nerdfighters!
I need an opinion...
How does this sound? I'm not sure that it's good. I need some opinions.There is a certain darkness about everything. That light of hope that goes out in a hospital.That bittersweet sadness of a pregnant teenager. The moment of heartbreak when you find that your puppy has been hit by a car. Oh yes, that darkness. Death, chaos, and heartbreak. All of it. That is were I come in. I am Zane. You have only seen me in your form. If you have you seen me for what I truly am, you are sure to die before…See More
Kristi Marie Winters replied to ImATwistedFireStarter's discussion From NerdFighter Girls to NerdFighter Boys in the group Nerdfighterlike"1) Name? Kristi2) Age? 173) Location? 45 minutes away from PIttsburgh4) Hobbies? Writing, playing my saxophone, reading5) Favorite book? Looking for Alaska or Neverwhere6) What kind of nerdfighter are you? Potterhead, Panemaniac, Satrkid, Trekkie,…"
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This is a group for all those Nerdfighters who want to find other Nerdfighters to fall into Nerdfighterlike with.
Kristi Marie Winters commented on Zoidmania's group Musical Nerdfighters"I play saxophone! I prefer alto!"
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Musical Nerdfighters
Any of you musicians out there should join this group and share your musical talent. I'm a trombonist, but the picture is just downright awesome.
Kristi Marie Winters added a discussion to the group Nerdfighters Lonely Hearts
Anyone living near Pittsburgh?
Well, hi there! I'm Kristi and I'm 17. I am aslo looking for nerdfighter like, so if you want to like get to know me let me know. Please only reply if you live around Pittsburgh, PA! By the way, I'm Pansexual. So if you're a man, woman, or transitioning then I'd date you. Name:Gender:Age:Hobbies:Looks:Describe yourself: Thanks kids!See More
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- What Kind of Nerdfighter Are You?
- Writer-type, I guess.
- About Me:
- 17
Saxophone
Theatre Kid
Writer
Reader
Potterhead
Starkid
Trekkie
- Favorite Books, Movies, Music, and more
- Books: (Obviously) John Green's books, Harry Potter, Daughter of Smoke and Bone, LGBT books
Movies: Milk, V for Vendetta, Repo! The Genetic Opera, The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari
Music: Swish and Flick, 1D, Nirvana, Alice in Chains, Classical music
VIdeo GA,es: The SIms, Halo, Xenosaga, Forsaken World
- What's your favorite thing to put on your head?
- Hats, like fun beanies/winter hats
- If you could do your happy dance with anyone who would it be with?
- Hank Green
- When did you start watching the Vlogbrothers?
- December, 2011
- Make up your own DFTBA initialism!
- DFTBN
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