"Did anyone notice that the author of the book that Clara had in "The Bells Of Saint John" was Amelia Williams?? I had to rewind the eposide to double check. When I realized it, I died a litte. I miss the Ponds!!"
I came up with this idea a while ago.I often think that the world can occasionally be unfair to teenagers. I want to decrease worldsuck, but I don't know how to go about it. I don't have enough money or the correct bank account to donate to any charities, I can't vote to decrease suck levels in my country, and basically the amount of stuff I can do is restricted by school, my parents, and my age.So I've been thinking: how does a teenager go about decreasing suck levels? And I believe I have the…See More
"I really liked those changes. Ill work on a flashback section and post it if I come up with one I like. You are really good at this stuff so if I ever need any more help on stories I'll be sure to come to you. Thanks!"
"You are very welcome. For the backstory, I am not sure. As the author, you must make that choice, if you will add it at all. To keep the structure basically the same, you could have a short/long flashback right after he mentions he cheating. Or…"
"Thank you so much for this suggestions. Many of the spots you pointed out I was a little unsure of myself and did not know how to fix. For adding backstory about cheating, where would you add it??? I will attatch an edited version and bold the areas…"
"Overall, I very much liked it. You are a master at mood, tone and word choice. If anything, I would suggest adding on to it. By itself, it is already good, but it leaves me wanting more. The cheating is thrown in rather randomly, like a surprise.…"
I recently wrote this story and I was wondering if someone could give me feedback on it. Im open to all ideas! As the rain poured down around me, I stood there in the middle of the street watching you walk away under your favorite umbrella. I yelled I’m sorry into the grey distance hoping you would hear me and turn around. It wasn’t supposed to end like this. Not us. As you turned into a speck in the pouring rain, I stood there paralyzed by my thoughts. This day would be forever burned…See More
Art, literature, science fiction, history, and music nerdfighter.
I love being who I am. I really like synchronized swimming and acting. I can play a pretty good amount of piano. I am also not very good at explaining myself.... I am just me.
Favorite Books, Movies, Music, and more
Books: Crank, Glass, Whirligig, Looking for Alaska, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Sherlock Homes, The Hobbit, and Animal Farm.
Movies: Anything with Johnny Depp, The Lorax, Whip it,
Music: I alternative music the best. My favorite band is Coldplay. I also really like Matt & Kim, Lana del Rey, Death Cab for Cutie, The Beatles, Mumford & Sons, and Walk the Moon
What's your favorite thing to put on your head?
If you could do your happy dance with anyone who would it be with?