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I'm sure some of you have heard of NaNoWriMo (if you haven't, go here: http://www.nanowrimo.org/), which was where I managed to finally complete a piece of…Continue

Started this discussion. Last reply by God ~blogs admin ~ Aug 29, 2012.

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God ~blogs admin ~ replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
Aug 29, 2012
Nicole Sherman replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"No worries, you've already given me some good advice!  Definitely no hurry, I'm still finishing up last year's NaNo and gearing up for this year O.o"
Aug 29, 2012
God ~blogs admin ~ replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"Oh aye, if you fiddle with the start, the middle and end will need fiddled as well. The circle of lif-editing :POnce I've the time, I'll give the rest a read, bit floored at the moment with all me reading material though xD"
Aug 28, 2012
Nicole Sherman replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"It's actually finished (the first thing I've ever COMPLETED), I'm just putting it up a few chapters here and there on fictionpress in the hopes of feedback, but yeah going to start the rewrite a couple of chapters at a time. I'm…"
Aug 28, 2012
God ~blogs admin ~ replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"Well, I see you've put it up chapter per chapter. I'd say getting the book/story/whatever done first is the most important aspect, but if there's a lot of editing to be desired; that'll be a ton of work in itself. Get through,…"
Aug 28, 2012
Nicole Sherman replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"That makes sense!  "Showing" over "telling" is something I've been working on, and characterization too, so it definitely helps to have someone else point out specific areas (and I love your suggestion too). …"
Aug 28, 2012
God ~blogs admin ~ replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"To be fair, it's not so much as him being whiny, more the fact that we're being bombarded with his thoughts. It could be said of any character if we were getting their run down mentally. Now, one way to 'fix' - and I use fix very…"
Aug 28, 2012
Nicole Sherman replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"Thanks!  Haha, I never thought of it but I could see him being whiny :P  I am going to need to polish up my swordfighting skills to make that part a little more exciting :)  Thank you so much for reading!"
Aug 28, 2012
God ~blogs admin ~ replied to Nicole Sherman's discussion Feedback!
"I read the first thingy-ma-bob, and would give the rest a read if I had more time at the moment. But overall, the start seems a bit fast, the lad whose/who's/Idon'tknowI'mgrammaricallydislexic telling the story is a wee bit whiney. If…"
Aug 28, 2012
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Aug 25, 2012
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I'm sure some of you have heard of NaNoWriMo (if you haven't, go here: http://www.nanowrimo.org/), which was where I managed to finally complete a piece of fiction after years of starting and abandoning projects.  Anyway, I have a REALLY rough draft on my hands, which I know needs a ton of work before it would remotely resemble something publishable.  To that end, I'd love to get some feedback on it.  Plot holes, weird sentences, characters that…See More
Aug 25, 2012
Nicole Sherman replied to God ~blogs admin ~'s discussion Woe
"Pretty good for just being bored :P  Whenever I try to make a poem that rhymes it always sounds too contrived, but yours flows really well."
Aug 25, 2012
Nicole Sherman replied to Declan Roden's discussion What can I do to decrease world suck?
"I just had to say that I love this idea <3"
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What Kind of Nerdfighter Are You?
The awesome kind!
About Me:
I'm a mom of two who has been a self-identified nerd all of my life. I'm proud that my kids identify the same way!!
Favorite Books, Movies, Music, and more
Waaayyyy too many to list lol
What's your favorite thing to put on your head?
Ponytail :P
If you could do your happy dance with anyone who would it be with?
Neil Gaiman <3
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When did you start watching the Vlogbrothers?
January, 2007
Make up your own DFTBA initialism!
Dark forces try bad acronyms ... I'm bad at this lol

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